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Knowledge of the text/extract: 10, I put the extract into excellent context, I cited where the extract lies in the work, and I stated how the extract develops the rest of the work
Understanding of literary features effects: 7, I mentioned three literary devices and their effect on the extract and work as a whole. Furthermore, I spoke of how this develops the reader's perspective.
Organization: 4, Besides a few pauses and redundancies, I have a nice flow and am not bound to the chronological order of the extract.
Language: 3, Sometimes it was not very professional, but I used buzzwords
Great IOC Cole! The first thing that immediately stood out to me was how you paced yourself to avoid speaking too quickly. This is a very smart strategy to use to ensure that your IOC meets the 8-10 minute requirement, and is something that many people, including myself, need to work on. However, some parts seemed too dragged out. For example, you used up two precious minutes of your time before you even began talking about your analysis! I thought the content was great. The analysis of the syntax was spot on. Overall, great work! Keep it up!
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